HAJAR HERMAS: The first speaker was really good, especially that she brough an intimae object, insead of picking randomly. Also, her english is very nice.
Kawtar El Azouki I like the third speech, and the speaker as well! The tone of voice and pronunciation were good. The object chosen was interesting, and the interpretations of its parts made sense. The one second hesitation did not affect the quality of the speech. The speaker was able to maintain eye contact.
The second speaker: was stressed at the beginning, he maintained eye contact very well he introduced his topic clearly and he related the object to himself very well; also he used appropriate and clear language and a good posture.
The first speaker gave an interesting self introduction, I appreciate the fact that she came with a teddy bear, it reflects her personality. She was confident during the speech and spoke perfect english.
The voice of the third speaker is really nice, and the the speed of her talk is good and understandable and she really talks to the audience and uses a lot of eye contact.
The first speaker had good delivery, I liked the sentimental object, she maintained good eye contact with the audience, and although she was moving a tiny bit her posture was overall good. - Sami ELARIF
I chose the third speech. The delivery of the speaker is really good. I liked how she took her time and seemed so spontaneous. She maintained eye contact with the audience, despite the fact that she panicked a little, it didn't affect her presentation. When it comes to the speech itself, it was informative. I did know a little bit about herself and it was well structured. -Marwa Qassimi
I liked the third speaker. She conveyed her personality very well through her statements, her smile, her eye contact and the way she related the different parts of the necklace to herself.
I really enjoyed the first speech, I think that it was well structured with direct thesis statement. Besides, her fluent pronunciation, choice of words, and the sentimental chosen object made it feel honest and authentic. I also liked the fact that she shared some specific details of her personality, which help create a smooth and tender atmosphere and bond with the audience. Finally, her posture was good, she didn't let her stress affect her gestures. -Aaya Diouri
First speech: I think that the first speech is well done. The speaker has a beautiful prononciation and knew how to express her feelings about her teddy bear and what he means for her. We could feel in most of the speech that she was stressed however, she has been able to control it somehow. And last but not least, what I liked the most was her ability of keeping eye contact and capturing the listener's attention. -Dohri Nouha
The first speech is really interesting. The way she expresses her feelings and her eloquence are unique. She has a friendly personality, but she was kind of nervous during the speech and I think it was not really natural but more like she learned her speech. However, it is cute how she presents her little teddy bear. We can feel that it is a really important object for her. ALIA EDDIOURI.
I really like the first speech, it is well sturctered. I like the idea of the object used in the speech (the teddy bear), she choosed a cute object the fact that it pushes the person to continue watching and listening until the end. She looked a little bit stressed; however, she was trying to defeat her stress and look more confident during the delivery, in addition to that; she tried to keep the eye contact with the audience and her body language was somehow good.
The third speech is enjoyable. The object choosed is somehow interesting. Moreover, the delivery is also good, the speaker looks confident, her body language is great; she maintained the eye contact with the audience, she also knew how to deliver her speech in a spontaneous way (she doesn't look stressed), furthermore, she also knew how to express her feelings in a nice way.
MARWA BAMOUSS THIRD SPEECH I personally really enjoyed this speech. The speaker looks relaxed and confident. She maintened eye contact with the audience throughout the whole speech and didn't hesitate to use body language. She found the perfect words to describe an object as simple as a necklace, linking it to her love twoards her family and friends. She showed us that it had a bigger value than we might think since each part of that necklace holds a special meaning to her. Moreover, the fact that she kept a smile on her face during the speech only made it more enjoyable!
MOHAMED AMINE GHAFIL FIRST SPEECH The use of the teddy bear made this speech stand out. I consider it a good attention grabber. Since this object was close to her, she was very easily able to describe her personality while describing the item itself. Her delivery was good, she looked confident and maintained good eye contact with the audience.
I really liked the first speech; I believe it was well-structured and contained a concise thesis statement. Additionally, her fluent delivery made it sound genuine and real. I really appreciated how she was engaging with the audience since she was maintaining eye contact. Finally, she had a good posture, which makes a good delivery. Overall, it was a well-organized speech. Well done!!
Ali Ouedghiri Saidi COM 1301 07 second speech: In my opinion, he used his phone too much and had no sentimental object, but his speech was structured, it would be better if he spoke more loudly
Mohammed En-Nay Second speech: His speech was good and well organised in terms of presenting his ideas and the posture, he didn’t move too much and he was looking at the students, In my opinion if he wasn’t nervous a little bit, he could present it even better, but he still deserves an A .
AYA LATAHY I enjoyed listening to the third speech. First, because we can feel the connection between her and her necklace. Secondly, she spoke clearly about her personality and then her dreams. Third, she respected the time of the speech, however, she forgot to say "Thank you" at the end and instead she terminated her speech with "That's it". She has potential as she can do better.
SALMA LAMNOUAR: I really liked the fist and second speeches since they both had good postures and they also had a clear speech that could be understood by any type of audience, besides this what made me enjoy them even more is the fact that had a good connection with their objects which made me wanting to know more and listening carefully for what they had to say.
Rami Fethi; First speech; I really liked her item choice, it definitively has a deeper meaning even if she feels stressed even tough it is extremely clear she rehearsed and worked for it a lot because of how structured the speech is. Her body gesture through the usage of her hands was extremely smooth and also looking at the whole audience.
Ayat Mohyi: 1st speech. The content of the speech was really significant. The correlation between her personality and her teddy bear was coherent and clear. I also liked her delivery: she maintained great eye contact, and seemed comfortable even though I think she was talking a little bit too fast. Overall, I enjoyed her speech!
I really enjoyed the first speech, I believe that she was well prepared and she kept eye contact with the audience. I liked the choice of the teddy bear as it helped understand her personality and feel connected with her childhood, making the speech more personal.
I really liked the first speech. The student was confident and she was able to maintain eye contact during the whole period. The teddy bear was a geat idea, it made her performance more captivating and personal.
Maissaa Bihi, COM 1301 08 I really like the first speech, especially the delivery. The girl was moving her eyes from one person to another in order to meet the eye contact requirement. Her voice was confident and she took her time to breathe. She was neither very slow nor very fast. The speech was full of information about herself and her personality. I also like the choice of the teddy bear. For the third speech, I liked the content more than the delivery because the speaker was organized and her ideas were clear. I loved how she explained the sentimental connection she has with her necklace and how it reflects her personality. However, she seemed a little stressed.
FATIMA EZZAHRAE MASSDAR I really enjoyed the first speech. Her speech was well planned and delivered in a slow manner. She had a good posture , was confident and managed to maintain good eye contact with the audience.
Ragdah Abuljadayel I liked the third speech, she had a great object and she explained the meaning of that necklace perfectly and she was able to relate her life and people in her life to the different pieces of that necklace. She looked around the room and her voice was clear. She got her message across well and I believe her speech said a lot about her.
Meryam Khatib The first speech was very interesting . The person was well prepared and had her ideas clear and organized. The delivery of the speech was great. She was confident, her tone was perfect as well as the pronunciation of the words and hand gestures .
Kenza Toreis I really liked the third one. The speaker delivered her speech in a very relaxed and clear manner. The content of the speech was very intersting, I enjoyed the way she conveyed her personality through the necklace and the way she explained the deep connection she has with it.
Nada Bouskouk I really loved the first speech. The girl delivered her speech in a clear way and her ideas were well organised, as we can notice an obvious connection between her and the object she has picked. I also liked the fact that she kept a good eye contact with all of the audience and kept also a good posture along her delivery.
Selma Habhouba I think the second speech was quite interesting: the speaker used an object that is not always considered to hold a sentimental value, however he knew how to relate it to himself and to his personality. His speech was well structured and he also maintained eye-contact and a good posture.
Pooja Damodharan - COM 1301 08 All three speakers did an amazing job with their content. Their speech was well written and had good flow. Speaker 1 gave a very clear and coordinated speech. She maintained eye contact throughout the speech and her posture was great. The object she opted for was also positively impacted the speech. Speaker 2 had a remarkable speech as his content was great because it was well structured. It was interesting in its own way. Speaker 3 held a relaxed, calm and composed posture. Her tone was smooth and that kept me engaged throughout. Her object was small, yet significant and she did a great job connecting it to herself.
I really enjoyed the first speech. It was well-organized, and the speaker shared many aspects of her life, creatively connecting them to her teddy bear. I think that she kept a decent posture and a pleasant tone in her speech.
I really enjoyed watching the three speeches, and the first speech is my favorite. The teddy bear she chose as an object was adorable and it shows that it holds a special place in her heart. She also knew how to correctly deliver and share her interesting aspects and ideas with the audience. The whole speech was really good.
ALIAA AAMER i really liked the three speeches especially the third one. It was very sentimental and full of tenderness and nostalgia. Their speeches were well organized which helped the audience remember what they were talking about.Also, they made really good eye contact, they were looking directly in the eyes of audience. They all looks very nice and confident talking in public with a loud and clear voice and volume and they all emphasize ideas with their hands except the first speaker that moved her hands in an awkward way.
i really enjoyed the first speech, the speaker gave us a very clear speech, she shared with us many sides of her life, she also maintained the eye contact throughout the speech well with the crowd, however she looked a little bit stressed but not something you could recognize so easily, i think she did a good job with her speech.
I enjoyed watching the 3rd video because of the eye contact, hand gestures and voice tone who were all really good. All in all, the speech was really good.
The second speech was seemingly well prepared and well presented. Not only did the speaker succeed in drawing the link between his object(the external drive) and his personality, but the way he presented his speech and his gestures were fantastic. However, one point to add is that during the last minute of his speech, his eyes were locked on one single person, instead of spreading out his field of view over all of his audience. Overall it was indeed a great cherishable speech.
I enjoyed the first speech very much. The speaker had excellent voice control and she managed to effectively modulate her gaze to engage the audience with the speech. She also managed to effectively display her teddy bear and introduce herself through the object. Overall, it was a very pleasant performance.
Second speech: The speaker seemed confident throughout his speech, although his object was unexpected, he surprised me with how well he linked it to his personal life, bringing up his family and friends in the process. Moreover, he kept good eye contact and voice tone while speaking, all while seeming emotionally involved.
Salma Abid The first speaker had a very good tone. She brought her teddy bear as her object and she succeeded in relating it to herself. Her information was delivered in a very smooth way. All in all, her speech was great
The first speaker: A well delivered speech. She had a clear voice tone and maintained eye contact with the audience. Seh didn't use any notes, and we were able to know more about her fr the speech.
Speech 1: I liked the speech, the speaker was very fluent and communicated her feeling and experiences with her teddy bear very clearly. She connected many of her personality traits, experiences to her special object. Her speech was well organized with an introduction, body and conclusion.
Rania Atmani I really liked the third speaker, i enjoyed her speech. The object was interesting, and i like the way she linked " the necklace" to her family and her three best friends smoothly. There is a strong connection between the speaker and the audience, she seems confident, and relaxed. Although sometimes she stops talking , but she knew how to control the situation and continue her speech as if nothing happened.
The First speach was soo good, i liked the hand gesture, the way she talked (slow, controlled, and articulatted) . The speach was well strucured and also the vocabulary used . A 10 out of 10 speach i would say
i was really impressed with the first speech. The student displayed confidence and kept eye contact throughout the entire presentation. The use of the teddy bear was a brilliant touch, adding a personal and engaging element to her performance.
Maëva Speech 1: I really enjoyed the first speech. She was confident with excellent eye contact. Her clear pronunciation and engaging delivery made the speech heartfelt, despite a bit of visible nervousness.
Speech 2: It was well-organized and insightful. He effectively connected the object to his personal experiences. Though a bit nervous at first, he maintained good eye contact and improved as the speech went on.
Speech 3: The speech was engaging and well-delivered. Her calm tone and good eye contact kept the audience's attention, and she handled a brief hesitation smoothly.
I saw the first speech it was very well structured. She spoke without relying on any notes, maintained excellent eye contact with the audience , and her posture was good, in addition to her fluency.
First speech: I found the first speech very well organized, the tone and eye contact she was making contributes to our 100% focus with what she was saying, I really enjoyed it.
Second speech: The second speech was well structured, we could focus with the content he was delivering but something was missing in the way he was presenting.
Third speech: The third speech marked my attention by the voice and the clam she was sharing with the audience. It was very captivating, we could feel the value of every word she was saying.
The first speech was perfect. Her mannerisms were on point as well as her ability to make eye contact with the audience. Her choice of object was really insightful. Since it gave us a clear idea about her personality and how she considers her teddy bear as a friend. The second was also great and he talked about his love for travel but he made the mistake of relying a lot on his notes. The third speech was perfect but should have raised her voice more.
-First speech: Even though she seemed quite nervous, her speech was delivered clearly, she maintained an upright posture while keeping eye contact with each student in the room. The object choice was very emotional.
-Second speech: His timing is perfect. We could sense that he was a little bit stressed, but his speech and posture were both well-delivered and the object was interesting.
-Third speech: Her voice is very calming. she talked in a calm way which shows 0 signs of nervousness. Her eye contact was very graceful. It's clear that there is a special connection between her and her necklace through her way of speaking and her way of looking at it. except at the end, it looked like she was loosing her words.
The first speech was exceptional the way that she delivered the speech was perfect
For the second speech he use all of the techniques of how we should delivered a speech Lastly she was very clear and I got her Idea very fast she made good eye contact also her voice was very calm and nice to hear
First speech: I loved the first speech. Rather, the straightforwardness with which she made those bold statement and her manner of logically piecing her thought are enough evidences on how much relation existing between that girl to that object (teddy bear). She had excellent posture and eye contact with every person in the audience, which I thought was quite nice, and I see that these are the appropriate postures of a good public speaking.
Second speech: The second speech seemed well prepared and delivered since he was managed to connect his subject (the external drive) with his personality. In addition, he looked really engaged throughout and maintained strong eye contact and tone of voice.
Third speech: Regarding the third speaker, I thought her speech was excellent. The object caught my attention, and I appreciated how she carefully connected "the necklace" to her loved people (parents and friends). She seems confident and at relaxed and there's a good connection between her and the audience. Meanwhile, she knew how to control the interruptions when she got stuck by her smile that made the audience stay focused with her.
1st speech: I liked the speech and the delivery, it was fascinating to know what a big part her teddy bear plays in her life. But couldn’t help but notice that the girl kept interlocking her hands during the speech.
2nd speech: I was invested in his story and his delivery was good, although he seemed nervous at the start of his speech and kept looking down at his notes.
3rd speech: The girl had a calming voice and maintained a consistent pace while delivering her speech. I really enjoyed it. She took the time to share insights into her life and her deep connection to her necklace. Oumaima Lachrame
Speech 1: I loved how confident the speaker was and how she maintained eye contact and smiled throughout the whole speech. I also liked the fact that she brought an intimate object (teddy bear) which reflects her personality.
Speech 2: Although the speaker was quite nervous at first, his voice was very clear and maintained a good posture throughout the whole speech.
Speech 3: I love this speech. The voice of the speaker is very nice and her pronunciation is good. Despite the fact that she was nervous a little, she maintained a good posture and eye contact throughout the speech. I think that the speech was well structured and she provided the audience with a direct thesis statement. Overall, I enjoyed listening to this speech and the object she chose (the necklace) was really interesting
Sarah Chermat<146487> When it comes to the first student, the speech was perfectly delivered. She respected all the requirements of a speech delivery. The student expressed herself in a fluent and confident way. She also made sure to use her hands and maintain eye contact with the audience. The student used a conversational style and made sure to articulate, talk slowly, and make the audience hear and understand everything she said. When it comes to the object, it was perfectly presented and the relationship between her and this object was perfectly elaborated.
The second student delivered his speech in a professional way. He insisted on maintaining eye contact with the audience, using his hands, and talking slowly. He smoothly presented his object (external Hard Drive) and explained why he chose that object and what does it say about his personality.
Finally, the third student, succeeded in delivering an excellent speech. Her voice and pronunciation were clear, she had a smile on her face throughout the whole speech, and maintained eye contact with the audience. She first presented her necklace and proceeded to explain why she chose it and how it reflect different aspects of her personality. Her speech was very heartfelt and emotional.
I really liked the first speech. The speaker was very confident and didn't stop maintaining eye contact with the audience. The object itself was something we all have or had in our childhood, but she mad it very special by reflecting her life on that teddy bear.
For the second speech, the speaker was quite nervous but managed to deliver his speech with a clear voice tone while maintaining eye contact with the audience and a good posture.
Finally, for the third speech, I really think that she also did succeed in her speech delivery. I was really impressed by the way she always kept a smile in here face and talked about her necklace in a way that she was actually happy to tell us about how does it reflect on her personality. By other words, she used emotions in her speech engaging listeners to focus even more.
The first student gave a great speech, speaking clearly and confidently, using gestures, and keeping eye contact. She explained her object and its importance well.
The second student spoke professionally, focusing on eye contact, gestures, and speaking slowly. He introduced his external hard drive and shared why it’s important.
Finally, the third student delivered an excellent speech, with clear speech and eye contact. She showed her necklace and explained its personal meaning in a heartfelt way.
I thought that the first speech was well done. I really liked her body language, it made her seem confident and sure about what she was saying. Also, I appreciated her maintaining eye contact with the listeners. We can also see that she practiced her speech a lot, as there is little to no stuttering.
The second speech was also very good. Although he seemed a bit nervous and had to look at his notes sometimes, the delivery was good. He made us feel how valuable his object was to him and how it holds so many important memories.
The third speech was excellent. I liked how she kept smiling throughout the whole speech. We also felt the connection she has with her object. She succeeded in showing all the things she shares with her object. Her body language also portrayed how confident she was.
I really enjoyed the first speech because the speaker was confident and made strong eye contact. Her clear and engaging way of speaking, even though she seemed a little nervous. The second speech was organized, with the speaker effectively relating personal experiences to the object. He was a bit nervous at first but gained confidence. The third speech was well-presented, with the speaker staying calm, making good eye contact, and smoothly handling a brief pause while keeping the audience engaged.
For the first speaker, she is very well spoken and fluent. She maintained great eye contact with the audience. The structure of the speech is harmonious and each paragraph is related to the other. Except she talks in a fast way so it makes it harder to focus on the content. She also does a lot of mannerism. For the second speaker, he has a great posture and great voice tone but it was clear that he was stressed and disturbed. The structure of his speech could be developed. For the third speech, I really liked the speech. Firstly, the object chosen itself is very interesting. The speaker is confident, the tone of her voice is great and not monotonous. The speech was enjoyable.
First speech : I think that the speech is well written. She seemed really confident confident. Her speech was very delivered to the audience with no mistakes.
Second speech: He looked slightly nervous and stuttered. It seemed like he needed a bit more practice with the content. However, it was still very good, and it probably my favorite structure amonh the three speeches.
Third speech: Very good. For me, her delivery was the best among the three. She kept smiling throughout the whole speech, which helps connecting with audience. And thus, we felt concerned and interested about her object.
Nada Salhi For the first speech, it was really good for me, she mantained a good conversational style and her tone was stable. However, I think that she used a basic introduction without focusing on choosing a good attention grabber to introduce her object. All in all, I found the speech very interesting and coherent. Concerning the second speech, it is well develloped exept from a little nervousness of the speaker at the begining, which is normal. For the third speech, the girl seems to be very touched with her necklace, which give us; the audience some interest in what she is delivering. It is a good speech indeed.
First speech :The speech was excellent, and she appeared very confident. Her delivery was easily understood, without mistakes, and successful in reaching the audience.
Second speech: The second speaker had good posture and a strong voice tone, nevertheless,he appeared uncomfortable and distracted. The structure of his speech may be strengthened. Third speech: Her delivery was great, and I considered it the best of the three. She smiled throughout, which made it easy for the audience to connect with her and stay focused on her topic.
The first speaker: gave an excellent speech. Her voice was clear and confident, making it easy for everyone to follow. She maintained strong eye contact with the audience, which kept us engaged throughout. Also, She didn’t use any notes, and we learned more about her. The second speech: he did a good job, the presentation of the ideas was clear. He stood well, didn’t move around much, and kept looking at the students. The third speech: the delivery of the speaker was really good and enjoyable. I loved how she expressed her personality clearly through her words and the eye contact with the audience. Her object was really interesting. NOUHA MOUZI
For the first speech , it was very engaging. The speaker was confident, made good eye contact, and spoke clearly. The second speech was well-organized and insightful. The speaker connected the object to personal stories, which was great even if he was a little nervous at first. The third speech was iwell-delivered. The speaker was calm and kept eye contact.
1.She had a very creative speech with good structure, however her stress ws shown on how she was playing with her hands and she spoke too fast 2.The delivery was good, using the desk to hide the stress was a smart move, the only onion I can say about this is that he used "ahh.. ahh" 3.First the timing was exact, the posture was great and she used the eye contact well, but she also stoped at some moments saying 'emm" or "ahh"
ALAE ELMOUSSATNI 1-the first speech was really good, the speaker was confident, maintained eye contact with the audience, and spoke loudly and clearly. But, she kept using gap fillers which made her speech seem less professional. 2- the second speech was also good, but we could tell that the speaker was nervous, which affected the delivery of his speech. 3- The last speech and my favorite among the 3 speeches; the speechmaker was well-spoken and spontaneous despite her nervousness.
Abdalahi Barray The first speech was structured well, and she maintained good eye contact i think. I also liked how she connected her object to her personal life, though a bit of nervousness was visible in her body language. The second speaker improved after a nervous start in his speech. His speech was consistent and clear with good eye contact and posture, though he relied on notes a bit too much I think. The third speaker delivered calmly and confidently. Her strong eye contact and connection to her object made the speech engaging, despite a brief hesitation from her body language. Abdalahi Barray
The first speaker had a well-structured speech, and her eye contact was strong, which really helped in engaging the audience. I also appreciated how she skillfully tied her object to her personal experiences. However, there was a slight hint of nervousness in her body language, which was understandable but noticeable.
As for the second speaker, although his start was a bit shaky due to nerves, he gained confidence as he went along. His delivery became consistent, and his eye contact and posture showed improvement throughout. However, he leaned on his notes a bit too much, which might have taken away from the spontaneity of the moment.
The third speaker stood out for her calm, confident demeanor. Her speech was delivered smoothly, and her strong eye contact, combined with the clear connection to her object, made her presentation particularly engaging. There was a small moment of hesitation in her body language, but it didn’t detract from the overall confidence of her delivery. Rim Griou
The first speech was well-structured. I liked how she introduced the object and demonstrated the integration between herself and the object. In future speeches, she should avoid touching her hands as it shows nervousness. The time was 20 seconds short of 3 minutes.
The second speech was good, but the speaker was nervous and repeated some words twice. He also neglected the right section of the audience. The time was 20 seconds short of 3 minutes.
The third speech was very good. She appeared confident and not stressed, but she also ignored the right section of the audience. The timing was spot on.
I liked the three of the speeches even though I preferred the first one for its content but also for the feelings she has for that teddy bear, the second one was also good but not as intense. As for the last one, it had a deep meaning and feelings but the gestures of the first one were slightly better.
Speech 1: The speech is structured and well-organized. The introduction, body and conclusion consist of all required elements. The speaker was successful in choosing an object, a teddy bear, that had a sentimental value and that helped her express her feelings, introduce her personality and herself in general, and establish some bonding with the audience. As for delivery, the speaker was fluent, had very nice pronunciation, and a good voice and tone. She also had good posture. Although she was a little stressed, her eye contact was effective, and overall, her gestures were appropriate. The speaker was successful in getting the listeners’ attention throughout the speech delivery. Excellent job!
Speech 2: This speech is well-structured. The speaker was successful in selecting an interesting and unusual object, an external hard drive, that he effectively related to himself and his personality. He used appropriate and clear language, a good voice and tone, and had a good posture. Although he seemed to be nervous at the beginning, he managed to progressively control himself and develop his self-confidence. He maintained good eye contact, though he sometimes focused on one side of his audience. Well done!
Speech 3: The speech was well organized. The speaker chose an object, a necklace, that she took care of relating to her family and best friends. The speaker used a conversational style that helped her get the attention of the audience. She seemed relaxed and confident, but she occasionally made some brief stops (hesitation; lapses of silence), and some mannerism (touching her hair) that she was aware of and tried to control the situation. She used a soft voice, smiled at the audience, and maintained good eye contact. She missed saying thank you. Perfect timing!
Idriss Cherki The three speeches were well presented and organized. However, I prefer the first speech. The speaker had a good object because it had sentimental value for her, and it helped us to know more about her. She was fluent and had a good posture, but she needs to work more on time (like 10-20 seconds more). In general, the speech contained all required elements requested by the professor. For the two other speeches, as I mentioned earlier, they showed a good performance, but they were stressed.
In my opinion all speeches were good, but I prefer the first one because the speaker was fluent and confident. Also, she has a good attention grabber, eye contact, and posture.
First Speech: The speaker delivered an outstanding performance, exuding confidence throughout. Her speech was clear, well-articulated, and free from errors. She successfully engaged the audience and communicated her message effectively.
Second Speech: The second presenter maintained a good posture and projected his voice well. However, he seemed a bit uneasy and distracted at times. Enhancing the overall structure of his speech could significantly improve its impact.
Third Speech: Her presentation stood out as the most impressive among the three. She delivered her speech with poise and enthusiasm, and her consistent smile created a warm connection with the audience, helping maintain their attention and interest in her topic.
The second speech was intelligent and well-structured. Despite his initial nervousness, the speaker did an excellent job of relating the item to personal stories.
The first speaker according to her body language she seems to be stressed. She was bouncing while delivering her speech and playing with her hand. However the delivery was good and she seems confident about what she's saying.
The second speaker has a good delivery but with so many gap fillers. He could have used more his body to express more his ideas. He also break the eye contact with his audience several times which may show that he is not that confident delivering his speech. However the speaker has a clear pronunciation.
When it comes to the third speaker her posture was good ,her body language too. The only problem that i noticed is that she used some gap fillers and she also lost her words. The object she presented seems to be very sentimental what makes the speech very relatable.
Speech 1: I really liked this speech. The speaker was confident and spoke clearly. The teddy bear was a nice choice and helped her talk about herself. She had good eye contact and posture, but she used too many gap fillers, which made it less smooth.
Speech 2: This was a good speech. The speaker picked an interesting object and explained it well. He seemed nervous at first but got better as he went on. His voice was clear, and he stood well, but he looked more at one side of the audience.
Speech 3: This was my favorite speech. The speaker was friendly and had a nice smile. The necklace had a strong meaning, and she explained it well. She seemed relaxed and connected with the audience, even though she paused a few times and forgot to say thank you.
The first speech was excellent, and I thought it had a clear thesis statement and was well-structured. In addition, it felt genuine and honest because of her fluid accent, word choice, and the emotive object she used. Additionally, I appreciated that she gave certain specifics about herself, which helped to establish a warm and comfortable connection with the audience. Last but not least, she had solid posture and avoided letting her tension influence her movements.
The special object in the second speech was unexpected, as people often don't link something electrical to feelings and memories, but having an external storage with photos in it was a smart idea. Apart from that the speaker tried to have a conversational style and did not read from any notes.
For the third piece, the object was quite generic, but it is the speech itself that makes the difference. Her eye contact, style of conversation, and intonation are what makes it exceptional.
For the first speech, I think the object she chose is very cute and holds a lot of sentimental value as it is something she had since very little. and although it is not a living object, it taught her so many things in life. Her speech was really nice to listen to.
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RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker was really great, her posture was good, and she speaks fluently. - Salma Errougani
RépondreSupprimerI liked how the second speaker's voice was very clear. I could understand every word he said.
RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker was great , She delivered a good fluent speech , she brought a teddy bear as an attention grabber , I really enjoyed her speech :)
RépondreSupprimerI really like the first speech. She didn't use any notes and had great eye contact with the audience, also she had a good posture too.
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RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker was really good, especially that she brough an intimae object, insead of picking randomly. Also, her english is very nice.
Kawtar El Azouki
RépondreSupprimerI like the third speech, and the speaker as well! The tone of voice and pronunciation were good. The object chosen was interesting, and the interpretations of its parts made sense. The one second hesitation did not affect the quality of the speech. The speaker was able to maintain eye contact.
The second speaker: was stressed at the beginning, he maintained eye contact very well he introduced his topic clearly and he related the object to himself very well; also he used appropriate and clear language and a good posture.
RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker gave an interesting self introduction, I appreciate the fact that she came with a teddy bear, it reflects her personality. She was confident during the speech and spoke perfect english.
RépondreSupprimerThe voice of the third speaker is really nice, and the the speed of her talk is good and understandable and she really talks to the audience and uses a lot of eye contact.
RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker had good delivery, I liked the sentimental object, she maintained good eye contact with the audience, and although she was moving a tiny bit her posture was overall good. - Sami ELARIF
RépondreSupprimerI chose the third speech. The delivery of the speaker is really good. I liked how she took her time and seemed so spontaneous. She maintained eye contact with the audience, despite the fact that she panicked a little, it didn't affect her presentation. When it comes to the speech itself, it was informative. I did know a little bit about herself and it was well structured. -Marwa Qassimi
RépondreSupprimerI liked the third speaker. She conveyed her personality very well through her statements, her smile, her eye contact and the way she related the different parts of the necklace to herself.
RépondreSupprimerI really enjoyed the first speech, I think that it was well structured with direct thesis statement. Besides, her fluent pronunciation, choice of words, and the sentimental chosen object made it feel honest and authentic. I also liked the fact that she shared some specific details of her personality, which help create a smooth and tender atmosphere and bond with the audience. Finally, her posture was good, she didn't let her stress affect her gestures. -Aaya Diouri
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RépondreSupprimerI think that the first speech is well done. The speaker has a beautiful prononciation and knew how to express her feelings about her teddy bear and what he means for her. We could feel in most of the speech that she was stressed however, she has been able to control it somehow. And last but not least, what I liked the most was her ability of keeping eye contact and capturing the listener's attention. -Dohri Nouha
The first speech is really interesting. The way she expresses her feelings and her eloquence are unique. She has a friendly personality, but she was kind of nervous during the speech and I think it was not really natural but more like she learned her speech. However, it is cute how she presents her little teddy bear. We can feel that it is a really important object for her.
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RIDOUANI MAJDOULINE
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I really like the first speech, it is well sturctered. I like the idea of the object used in the speech (the teddy bear), she choosed a cute object the fact that it pushes the person to continue watching and listening until the end. She looked a little bit stressed; however, she was trying to defeat her stress and look more confident during the delivery, in addition to that; she tried to keep the eye contact with the audience and her body language was somehow good.
RIDOUANI MAJDOULINE
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The third speech is enjoyable. The object choosed is somehow interesting. Moreover, the delivery is also good, the speaker looks confident, her body language is great; she maintained the eye contact with the audience, she also knew how to deliver her speech in a spontaneous way (she doesn't look stressed), furthermore, she also knew how to express her feelings in a nice way.
MARWA BAMOUSS
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I personally really enjoyed this speech. The speaker looks relaxed and confident. She maintened eye contact with the audience throughout the whole speech and didn't hesitate to use body language. She found the perfect words to describe an object as simple as a necklace, linking it to her love twoards her family and friends. She showed us that it had a bigger value than we might think since each part of that necklace holds a special meaning to her. Moreover, the fact that she kept a smile on her face during the speech only made it more enjoyable!
MOHAMED AMINE GHAFIL
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The use of the teddy bear made this speech stand out. I consider it a good attention grabber. Since this object was close to her, she was very easily able to describe her personality while describing the item itself. Her delivery was good, she looked confident and maintained good eye contact with the audience.
EL MEHDI EL BOUSTANI
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I really liked the first speech; I believe it was well-structured and contained a concise thesis statement. Additionally, her fluent delivery made it sound genuine and real. I really appreciated how she was engaging with the audience since she was maintaining eye contact. Finally, she had a good posture, which makes a good delivery.
Overall, it was a well-organized speech.
Well done!!
Ali Ouedghiri Saidi
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second speech:
In my opinion, he used his phone too much and had no sentimental object, but his speech was structured, it would be better if he spoke more loudly
Mohammed En-Nay
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His speech was good and well organised in terms of presenting his ideas and the posture, he didn’t move too much and he was looking at the students, In my opinion if he wasn’t nervous a little bit, he could present it even better, but he still deserves an A .
AYA LATAHY
RépondreSupprimerI enjoyed listening to the third speech. First, because we can feel the connection between her and her necklace. Secondly, she spoke clearly about her personality and then her dreams. Third, she respected the time of the speech, however, she forgot to say "Thank you" at the end and instead she terminated her speech with "That's it". She has potential as she can do better.
SALMA LAMNOUAR:
RépondreSupprimerI really liked the fist and second speeches since they both had good postures and they also had a clear speech that could be understood by any type of audience, besides this what made me enjoy them even more is the fact that had a good connection with their objects which made me wanting to know more and listening carefully for what they had to say.
Rami Fethi;
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I really liked her item choice, it definitively has a deeper meaning even if she feels stressed even tough it is extremely clear she rehearsed and worked for it a lot because of how structured the speech is. Her body gesture through the usage of her hands was extremely smooth and also looking at the whole audience.
Ayat Mohyi: 1st speech.
RépondreSupprimerThe content of the speech was really significant. The correlation between her personality and her teddy bear was coherent and clear. I also liked her delivery: she maintained great eye contact, and seemed comfortable even though I think she was talking a little bit too fast. Overall, I enjoyed her speech!
I really enjoyed the first speech, I believe that she was well prepared and she kept eye contact with the audience. I liked the choice of the teddy bear as it helped understand her personality and feel connected with her childhood, making the speech more personal.
RépondreSupprimerI really liked the first speech. The student was confident and she was able to maintain eye contact during the whole period. The teddy bear was a geat idea, it made her performance more captivating and personal.
RépondreSupprimerMaissaa Bihi, COM 1301 08
RépondreSupprimerI really like the first speech, especially the delivery. The girl was moving her eyes from one person to another in order to meet the eye contact requirement. Her voice was confident and she took her time to breathe. She was neither very slow nor very fast. The speech was full of information about herself and her personality. I also like the choice of the teddy bear.
For the third speech, I liked the content more than the delivery because the speaker was organized and her ideas were clear. I loved how she explained the sentimental connection she has with her necklace and how it reflects her personality. However, she seemed a little stressed.
FATIMA EZZAHRAE MASSDAR
RépondreSupprimerI really enjoyed the first speech. Her speech was well planned and delivered in a slow manner. She had a good posture , was confident and managed to maintain good eye contact with the audience.
Ragdah Abuljadayel
RépondreSupprimerI liked the third speech, she had a great object and she explained the meaning of that necklace perfectly and she was able to relate her life and people in her life to the different pieces of that necklace. She looked around the room and her voice was clear. She got her message across well and I believe her speech said a lot about her.
Meryam Khatib
RépondreSupprimerThe first speech was very interesting . The person was well prepared and had her ideas clear and organized. The delivery of the speech was great. She was confident, her tone was perfect as well as the pronunciation of the words and hand gestures .
Kenza Toreis
RépondreSupprimerI really liked the third one. The speaker delivered her speech in a very relaxed and clear manner. The content of the speech was very intersting, I enjoyed the way she conveyed her personality through the necklace and the way she explained the deep connection she has with it.
Nada Bouskouk
RépondreSupprimerI really loved the first speech. The girl delivered her speech in a clear way and her ideas were well organised, as we can notice an obvious connection between her and the object she has picked. I also liked the fact that she kept a good eye contact with all of the audience and kept also a good posture along her delivery.
Selma Habhouba
RépondreSupprimerI think the second speech was quite interesting: the speaker used an object that is not always considered to hold a sentimental value, however he knew how to relate it to himself and to his personality. His speech was well structured and he also maintained eye-contact and a good posture.
Pooja Damodharan - COM 1301 08
RépondreSupprimerAll three speakers did an amazing job with their content. Their speech was well written and had good flow.
Speaker 1 gave a very clear and coordinated speech. She maintained eye contact throughout the speech and her posture was great. The object she opted for was also positively impacted the speech.
Speaker 2 had a remarkable speech as his content was great because it was well structured. It was interesting in its own way.
Speaker 3 held a relaxed, calm and composed posture. Her tone was smooth and that kept me engaged throughout. Her object was small, yet significant and she did a great job connecting it to herself.
AHMED AMINE TARIB
RépondreSupprimerI really enjoyed the first speech. It was well-organized, and the speaker shared many aspects of her life, creatively connecting them to her teddy bear. I think that she kept a decent posture and a pleasant tone in her speech.
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RépondreSupprimerNoura Elfadili
RépondreSupprimerI really enjoyed watching the three speeches, and the first speech is my favorite.
The teddy bear she chose as an object was adorable and it shows that it holds a special place in her heart. She also knew how to correctly deliver and share her interesting aspects and ideas with the audience. The whole speech was really good.
ALIAA AAMER
RépondreSupprimeri really liked the three speeches especially the third one. It was very sentimental and full of tenderness and nostalgia. Their speeches were well organized which helped the audience remember what they were talking about.Also, they made really good eye contact, they were looking directly in the eyes of audience. They all looks very nice and confident talking in public with a loud and clear voice and volume and they all emphasize ideas with their hands except the first speaker that moved her hands in an awkward way.
Abdelhay Sarboute
RépondreSupprimeri really enjoyed the first speech, the speaker gave us a very clear speech, she shared with us many sides of her life, she also maintained the eye contact throughout the speech well with the crowd, however she looked a little bit stressed but not something you could recognize so easily, i think she did a good job with her speech.
Mehdi CHAFI
RépondreSupprimerI enjoyed watching the 3rd video because of the eye contact, hand gestures and voice tone who were all really good. All in all, the speech was really good.
Amine LAHNIN
RépondreSupprimerThe second speech was seemingly well prepared and well presented. Not only did the speaker succeed in drawing the link between his object(the external drive) and his personality, but the way he presented his speech and his gestures were fantastic. However, one point to add is that during the last minute of his speech, his eyes were locked on one single person, instead of spreading out his field of view over all of his audience. Overall it was indeed a great cherishable speech.
I enjoyed the first speech very much. The speaker had excellent voice control and she managed to effectively modulate her gaze to engage the audience with the speech. She also managed to effectively display her teddy bear and introduce herself through the object. Overall, it was a very pleasant performance.
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RépondreSupprimerSecond speech: The speaker seemed confident throughout his speech, although his object was unexpected, he surprised me with how well he linked it to his personal life, bringing up his family and friends in the process. Moreover, he kept good eye contact and voice tone while speaking, all while seeming emotionally involved.
Salma Abid
RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker had a very good tone. She brought her teddy bear as her object and she succeeded in relating it to herself. Her information was delivered in a very smooth way.
All in all, her speech was great
Dalal Ait-Essiba
RépondreSupprimerThe first speaker: A well delivered speech. She had a clear voice tone and maintained eye contact with the audience. Seh didn't use any notes, and we were able to know more about her fr the speech.
Speech 1: I liked the speech, the speaker was very fluent and communicated her feeling and experiences with her teddy bear very clearly. She connected many of her personality traits, experiences to her special object. Her speech was well organized with an introduction, body and conclusion.
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RépondreSupprimerI really liked the third speaker, i enjoyed her speech. The object was interesting, and i like the way she linked " the necklace" to her family and her three best friends smoothly. There is a strong connection between the speaker and the audience, she seems confident, and relaxed. Although sometimes she stops talking , but she knew how to control the situation and continue her speech as if nothing happened.
The First speach was soo good, i liked the hand gesture, the way she talked (slow, controlled, and articulatted) . The speach was well strucured and also the vocabulary used . A 10 out of 10 speach i would say
RépondreSupprimeri was really impressed with the first speech. The student displayed confidence and kept eye contact throughout the entire presentation. The use of the teddy bear was a brilliant touch, adding a personal and engaging element to her performance.
RépondreSupprimerMaëva
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I really enjoyed the first speech. She was confident with excellent eye contact. Her clear pronunciation and engaging delivery made the speech heartfelt, despite a bit of visible nervousness.
Speech 2:
It was well-organized and insightful. He effectively connected the object to his personal experiences. Though a bit nervous at first, he maintained good eye contact and improved as the speech went on.
Speech 3:
The speech was engaging and well-delivered. Her calm tone and good eye contact kept the audience's attention, and she handled a brief hesitation smoothly.
I saw the first speech it was very well structured. She spoke without relying on any notes, maintained excellent eye contact with the audience , and her posture was good, in addition to her fluency.
RépondreSupprimerRita Benhida:
RépondreSupprimerFirst speech: I found the first speech very well organized, the tone and eye contact she was making contributes to our 100% focus with what she was saying, I really enjoyed it.
Second speech: The second speech was well structured, we could focus with the content he was delivering but something was missing in the way he was presenting.
Third speech: The third speech marked my attention by the voice and the clam she was sharing with the audience. It was very captivating, we could feel the value of every word she was saying.
The first speech was perfect. Her mannerisms were on point as well as her ability to make eye contact with the audience. Her choice of object was really insightful. Since it gave us a clear idea about her personality and how she considers her teddy bear as a friend.
RépondreSupprimerThe second was also great and he talked about his love for travel but he made the mistake of relying a lot on his notes.
The third speech was perfect but should have raised her voice more.
-First speech: Even though she seemed quite nervous, her speech was delivered clearly, she maintained an upright posture while keeping eye contact with each student in the room. The object choice was very emotional.
RépondreSupprimer-Second speech: His timing is perfect. We could sense that he was a little bit stressed, but his speech and posture were both well-delivered and the object was interesting.
-Third speech: Her voice is very calming. she talked in a calm way which shows 0 signs of nervousness. Her eye contact was very graceful. It's clear that there is a special connection between her and her necklace through her way of speaking and her way of looking at it. except at the end, it looked like she was loosing her words.
The first speech was exceptional the way that she delivered the speech was perfect
RépondreSupprimerFor the second speech he use all of the techniques of how we should delivered a speech
Lastly she was very clear and I got her Idea very fast she made good eye contact also her voice was very calm and nice to hear
First speech:
RépondreSupprimerI loved the first speech. Rather, the straightforwardness with which she made those bold statement and her manner of logically piecing her thought are enough evidences on how much relation existing between that girl to that object (teddy bear). She had excellent posture and eye contact with every person in the audience, which I thought was quite nice, and I see that these are the appropriate postures of a good public speaking.
Second speech:
The second speech seemed well prepared and delivered since he was managed to connect his subject (the external drive) with his personality. In addition, he looked really engaged throughout and maintained strong eye contact and tone of voice.
Third speech:
Regarding the third speaker, I thought her speech was excellent. The object caught my attention, and I appreciated how she carefully connected "the necklace" to her loved people (parents and friends). She seems confident and at relaxed and there's a good connection between her and the audience. Meanwhile, she knew how to control the interruptions when she got stuck by her smile that made the audience stay focused with her.
1st speech: I liked the speech and the delivery, it was fascinating to know what a big part her teddy bear plays in her life. But couldn’t help but notice that the girl kept interlocking her hands during the speech.
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I was invested in his story and his delivery was good, although he seemed nervous at the start of his speech and kept looking down at his notes.
3rd speech: The girl had a calming voice and maintained a consistent pace while delivering her speech. I really enjoyed it. She took the time to share insights into her life and her deep connection to her necklace.
Oumaima Lachrame
Hiba Ezzahir <154200>
RépondreSupprimerSpeech 1: I loved how confident the speaker was and how she maintained eye contact and smiled throughout the whole speech. I also liked the fact that she brought an intimate object (teddy bear) which reflects her personality.
Speech 2: Although the speaker was quite nervous at first, his voice was very clear and maintained a good posture throughout the whole speech.
Speech 3: I love this speech. The voice of the speaker is very nice and her pronunciation is good. Despite the fact that she was nervous a little, she maintained a good posture and eye contact throughout the speech. I think that the speech was well structured and she provided the audience with a direct thesis statement. Overall, I enjoyed listening to this speech and the object she chose (the necklace) was really interesting
Sarah Chermat<146487>
RépondreSupprimerWhen it comes to the first student, the speech was perfectly delivered. She respected all the requirements of a speech delivery. The student expressed herself in a fluent and confident way. She also made sure to use her hands and maintain eye contact with the audience. The student used a conversational style and made sure to articulate, talk slowly, and make the audience hear and understand everything she said. When it comes to the object, it was perfectly presented and the relationship between her and this object was perfectly elaborated.
The second student delivered his speech in a professional way. He insisted on maintaining eye contact with the audience, using his hands, and talking slowly. He smoothly presented his object (external Hard Drive) and explained why he chose that object and what does it say about his personality.
Finally, the third student, succeeded in delivering an excellent speech. Her voice and pronunciation were clear, she had a smile on her face throughout the whole speech, and maintained eye contact with the audience. She first presented her necklace and proceeded to explain why she chose it and how it reflect different aspects of her personality. Her speech was very heartfelt and emotional.
Rayan Alaoui Ismaili <148166>
RépondreSupprimerI really liked the first speech. The speaker was very confident and didn't stop maintaining eye contact with the audience. The object itself was something we all have or had in our childhood, but she mad it very special by reflecting her life on that teddy bear.
For the second speech, the speaker was quite nervous but managed to deliver his speech with a clear voice tone while maintaining eye contact with the audience and a good posture.
Finally, for the third speech, I really think that she also did succeed in her speech delivery. I was really impressed by the way she always kept a smile in here face and talked about her necklace in a way that she was actually happy to tell us about how does it reflect on her personality. By other words, she used emotions in her speech engaging listeners to focus even more.
The first student gave a great speech, speaking clearly and confidently, using gestures, and keeping eye contact. She explained her object and its importance well.
RépondreSupprimerThe second student spoke professionally, focusing on eye contact, gestures, and speaking slowly. He introduced his external hard drive and shared why it’s important.
Finally, the third student delivered an excellent speech, with clear speech and eye contact. She showed her necklace and explained its personal meaning in a heartfelt way.
Bahaeddine Jifer 153819
RépondreSupprimerI thought that the first speech was well done. I really liked her body language, it made her seem confident and sure about what she was saying. Also, I appreciated her maintaining eye contact with the listeners. We can also see that she practiced her speech a lot, as there is little to no stuttering.
The second speech was also very good. Although he seemed a bit nervous and had to look at his notes sometimes, the delivery was good. He made us feel how valuable his object was to him and how it holds so many important memories.
The third speech was excellent. I liked how she kept smiling throughout the whole speech. We also felt the connection she has with her object. She succeeded in showing all the things she shares with her object. Her body language also portrayed how confident she was.
I really enjoyed the first speech because the speaker was confident and made strong eye contact. Her clear and engaging way of speaking, even though she seemed a little nervous. The second speech was organized, with the speaker effectively relating personal experiences to the object. He was a bit nervous at first but gained confidence. The third speech was well-presented, with the speaker staying calm, making good eye contact, and smoothly handling a brief pause while keeping the audience engaged.
RépondreSupprimerFor the first speaker, she is very well spoken and fluent. She maintained great eye contact with the audience. The structure of the speech is harmonious and each paragraph is related to the other. Except she talks in a fast way so it makes it harder to focus on the content. She also does a lot of mannerism.
RépondreSupprimerFor the second speaker, he has a great posture and great voice tone but it was clear that he was stressed and disturbed. The structure of his speech could be developed.
For the third speech, I really liked the speech. Firstly, the object chosen itself is very interesting. The speaker is confident, the tone of her voice is great and not monotonous. The speech was enjoyable.
First speech : I think that the speech is well written. She seemed really confident confident. Her speech was very delivered to the audience with no mistakes.
RépondreSupprimerSecond speech: He looked slightly nervous and stuttered. It seemed like he needed a bit more practice with the content. However, it was still very good, and it probably my favorite structure amonh the three speeches.
Third speech: Very good. For me, her delivery was the best among the three. She kept smiling throughout the whole speech, which helps connecting with audience. And thus, we felt concerned and interested about her object.
Nada Salhi
RépondreSupprimerFor the first speech, it was really good for me, she mantained a good conversational style and her tone was stable. However, I think that she used a basic introduction without focusing on choosing a good attention grabber to introduce her object. All in all, I found the speech very interesting and coherent.
Concerning the second speech, it is well develloped exept from a little nervousness of the speaker at the begining, which is normal.
For the third speech, the girl seems to be very touched with her necklace, which give us; the audience some interest in what she is delivering. It is a good speech indeed.
First speech :The speech was excellent, and she appeared very confident. Her delivery was easily understood, without mistakes, and successful in reaching the audience.
RépondreSupprimerSecond speech: The second speaker had good posture and a strong voice tone, nevertheless,he appeared uncomfortable and distracted. The structure of his speech may be strengthened.
Third speech: Her delivery was great, and I considered it the best of the three. She smiled throughout, which made it easy for the audience to connect with her and stay focused on her topic.
The first speaker: gave an excellent speech. Her voice was clear and confident, making it easy for everyone to follow. She maintained strong eye contact with the audience, which kept us engaged throughout. Also, She didn’t use any notes, and we learned more about her.
RépondreSupprimerThe second speech: he did a good job, the presentation of the ideas was clear. He stood well, didn’t move around much, and kept looking at the students.
The third speech: the delivery of the speaker was really good and enjoyable. I loved how she expressed her personality clearly through her words and the eye contact with the audience. Her object was really interesting.
NOUHA MOUZI
RépondreSupprimerFor the first speech , it was very engaging. The speaker was confident, made good eye contact, and spoke clearly.
The second speech was well-organized and insightful. The speaker connected the object to personal stories, which was great even if he was a little nervous at first.
The third speech was iwell-delivered. The speaker was calm and kept eye contact.
1.She had a very creative speech with good structure, however her stress ws shown on how she was playing with her hands and she spoke too fast
RépondreSupprimer2.The delivery was good, using the desk to hide the stress was a smart move, the only onion I can say about this is that he used "ahh.. ahh"
3.First the timing was exact, the posture was great and she used the eye contact well, but she also stoped at some moments saying 'emm" or "ahh"
ALAE ELMOUSSATNI
RépondreSupprimer1-the first speech was really good, the speaker was confident, maintained eye contact with the audience, and spoke loudly and clearly. But, she kept using gap fillers which made her speech seem less professional.
2- the second speech was also good, but we could tell that the speaker was nervous, which affected the delivery of his speech.
3- The last speech and my favorite among the 3 speeches; the speechmaker was well-spoken and spontaneous despite her nervousness.
Abdalahi Barray
RépondreSupprimerThe first speech was structured well, and she maintained good eye contact i think. I also liked how she connected her object to her personal life, though a bit of nervousness was visible in her body language.
The second speaker improved after a nervous start in his speech. His speech was consistent and clear with good eye contact and posture, though he relied on notes a bit too much I think.
The third speaker delivered calmly and confidently. Her strong eye contact and connection to her object made the speech engaging, despite a brief hesitation from her body language.
Abdalahi Barray
The first speaker had a well-structured speech, and her eye contact was strong, which really helped in engaging the audience. I also appreciated how she skillfully tied her object to her personal experiences. However, there was a slight hint of nervousness in her body language, which was understandable but noticeable.
RépondreSupprimerAs for the second speaker, although his start was a bit shaky due to nerves, he gained confidence as he went along. His delivery became consistent, and his eye contact and posture showed improvement throughout. However, he leaned on his notes a bit too much, which might have taken away from the spontaneity of the moment.
The third speaker stood out for her calm, confident demeanor. Her speech was delivered smoothly, and her strong eye contact, combined with the clear connection to her object, made her presentation particularly engaging. There was a small moment of hesitation in her body language, but it didn’t detract from the overall confidence of her delivery.
Rim Griou
The first speech was well-structured. I liked how she introduced the object and demonstrated the integration between herself and the object. In future speeches, she should avoid touching her hands as it shows nervousness. The time was 20 seconds short of 3 minutes.
RépondreSupprimerThe second speech was good, but the speaker was nervous and repeated some words twice. He also neglected the right section of the audience. The time was 20 seconds short of 3 minutes.
The third speech was very good. She appeared confident and not stressed, but she also ignored the right section of the audience. The timing was spot on.
I liked the three of the speeches even though I preferred the first one for its content but also for the feelings she has for that teddy bear, the second one was also good but not as intense. As for the last one, it had a deep meaning and feelings but the gestures of the first one were slightly better.
RépondreSupprimerSpeech 1: The speech is structured and well-organized. The introduction, body and conclusion consist of all required elements. The speaker was successful in choosing an object, a teddy bear, that had a sentimental value and that helped her express her feelings, introduce her personality and herself in general, and establish some bonding with the audience. As for delivery, the speaker was fluent, had very nice pronunciation, and a good voice and tone. She also had good posture. Although she was a little stressed, her eye contact was effective, and overall, her gestures were appropriate. The speaker was successful in getting the listeners’ attention throughout the speech delivery. Excellent job!
RépondreSupprimerSpeech 2: This speech is well-structured. The speaker was successful in selecting an interesting and unusual object, an external hard drive, that he effectively related to himself and his personality. He used appropriate and clear language, a good voice and tone, and had a good posture. Although he seemed to be nervous at the beginning, he managed to progressively control himself and develop his self-confidence. He maintained good eye contact, though he sometimes focused on one side of his audience. Well done!
Speech 3: The speech was well organized. The speaker chose an object, a necklace, that she took care of relating to her family and best friends. The speaker used a conversational style that helped her get the attention of the audience. She seemed relaxed and confident, but she occasionally made some brief stops (hesitation; lapses of silence), and some mannerism (touching her hair) that she was aware of and tried to control the situation. She used a soft voice, smiled at the audience, and maintained good eye contact. She missed saying thank you. Perfect timing!
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RépondreSupprimerIdriss Cherki
RépondreSupprimerThe three speeches were well presented and organized. However, I prefer the first speech. The speaker had a good object because it had sentimental value for her, and it helped us to know more about her. She was fluent and had a good posture, but she needs to work more on time (like 10-20 seconds more). In general, the speech contained all required elements requested by the professor.
For the two other speeches, as I mentioned earlier, they showed a good performance, but they were stressed.
In my opinion all speeches were good, but I prefer the first one because the speaker was fluent and confident. Also, she has a good attention grabber, eye contact, and posture.
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RépondreSupprimerThe speaker delivered an outstanding performance, exuding confidence throughout. Her speech was clear, well-articulated, and free from errors. She successfully engaged the audience and communicated her message effectively.
Second Speech:
The second presenter maintained a good posture and projected his voice well. However, he seemed a bit uneasy and distracted at times. Enhancing the overall structure of his speech could significantly improve its impact.
Third Speech:
Her presentation stood out as the most impressive among the three. She delivered her speech with poise and enthusiasm, and her consistent smile created a warm connection with the audience, helping maintain their attention and interest in her topic.
The second speech was intelligent and well-structured. Despite his initial nervousness, the speaker did an excellent job of relating the item to personal stories.
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SupprimerThe first speaker according to her body language she seems to be stressed. She was bouncing while delivering her speech and playing with her hand. However the delivery was good and she seems confident about what she's saying.
RépondreSupprimerThe second speaker has a good delivery but with so many gap fillers. He could have used more his body to express more his ideas. He also break the eye contact with his audience several times which may show that he is not that confident delivering his speech. However the speaker has a clear pronunciation.
RépondreSupprimerWhen it comes to the third speaker her posture was good ,her body language too. The only problem that i noticed is that she used some gap fillers and she also lost her words. The object she presented seems to be very sentimental what makes the speech very relatable.
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SupprimerSpeech 1:
SupprimerI really liked this speech. The speaker was confident and spoke clearly. The teddy bear was a nice choice and helped her talk about herself. She had good eye contact and posture, but she used too many gap fillers, which made it less smooth.
Speech 2:
This was a good speech. The speaker picked an interesting object and explained it well. He seemed nervous at first but got better as he went on. His voice was clear, and he stood well, but he looked more at one side of the audience.
Speech 3:
This was my favorite speech. The speaker was friendly and had a nice smile. The necklace had a strong meaning, and she explained it well. She seemed relaxed and connected with the audience, even though she paused a few times and forgot to say thank you.
The first speech was excellent, and I thought it had a clear thesis statement and was well-structured. In addition, it felt genuine and honest because of her fluid accent, word choice, and the emotive object she used. Additionally, I appreciated that she gave certain specifics about herself, which helped to establish a warm and comfortable connection with the audience. Last but not least, she had solid posture and avoided letting her tension influence her movements.
RépondreSupprimerThe special object in the second speech was unexpected, as people often don't link something electrical to feelings and memories, but having an external storage with photos in it was a smart idea. Apart from that the speaker tried to have a conversational style and did not read from any notes.
RépondreSupprimerFor the third piece, the object was quite generic, but it is the speech itself that makes the difference. Her eye contact, style of conversation, and intonation are what makes it exceptional.
For the first speech, I think the object she chose is very cute and holds a lot of sentimental value as it is something she had since very little. and although it is not a living object, it taught her so many things in life. Her speech was really nice to listen to.